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PostSubject: Rakutsu Hayasa   Tue Jul 07, 2015 11:51 pm

Name: Rakutsu Hayasa

Race: Sayian

Age: 16

Appearance Raku stands at five feet four inches and weights 120 pounds. His skin is very tan making it dark. He has long black hair going down his back with trimmed eye brows and blue eyes. His body is very built which is shown in his impressive muscles. He is often seen wearing a white wristband on one arm. He also wears a red and black shirt with no sleeves with black pants and red and black shoes. He hides his tail in his pants.

HomePlanet: Planet Vegeta

Backstory: After being birthed by his mother on Planet Vegeta, Rakutsu was sent to a low level planet after being considered a low class warrior. But a while after his pod left the planet it was somehow cut off from Vegeta after it's electronics malfunctioned. On Earth he was found by a young woman and old man.  He became the only child of a world famous doctor named Azumi Hayasa. Azumi hesitated the though of adopting him, but afte being persuade by her master, she took him in. As a baby, he loved being around her and her presents out a smile on his face. During the first five years of his life the child would stay in a temple with his mom and a old monk who became a grandfather to him and would later teach him about ki and combat. At this age the two returned home where she lived and worked as the top doctor for their hospital. He attended a nursery school where he met his two best friend Yuki and Akihiko when he and Amihiko fixed a tower of building blocks for her. He would soon find his love for Duel monsters when he watched a live duel of Yugi Moto. From that day forward his favorite major league duelist became Yugi. Years later he returned to the temple with his mom to begin his training because of what his grandfather saw in his vision of the future, but wasn't told of it. Even more years later he would go on to attend High school with his two best friends. He would become the Student council's Vice President by his friend's force and the star of the baseball team. Rakutsu doesn't train much because of the fact that, he is a student and has a life outside of training for no reason at all. But, only if he knew what his future holds.

Occupation: Student

Techniques:
Flight: The ability to fly at supersonic speeds

Ki blast: Is able to fire basic Ki blasts from his hands

Ki Sense: Is able to sense Ki sources from anywhere in the world.

Items: Yugioh cards


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PostSubject: Re: Rakutsu Hayasa   Wed Jul 08, 2015 1:25 am

your back story is vauge, add more before it can be accepted

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PostSubject: Re: Rakutsu Hayasa   Wed Jul 08, 2015 2:09 am

That any better?
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PostSubject: Re: Rakutsu Hayasa   Sat Jul 11, 2015 5:08 pm

though the back story is all but small it doesn't explain why you or how you got your powers, another thing is the last technique you have is two and you can only have one of those, and if you like yugioh why not have a deck, then you can post it under items with each card you have and if you have sayian armor that is considered an item

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PostSubject: Re: Rakutsu Hayasa   Sun Jul 12, 2015 3:55 pm

It's dragon ball z. He train was trained to use ki for attacks and high speed flight and doesn't even know about his true origins so no sayian armor.
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PostSubject: Re: Rakutsu Hayasa   Sun Jul 12, 2015 6:31 pm

that still doesn't answer the question of, how did your character learn these techniques

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PostSubject: Re: Rakutsu Hayasa   Sun Jul 12, 2015 7:16 pm

Sorry the original layout had it say the monk would later teach him which I just put in.
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PostSubject: Re: Rakutsu Hayasa   Sun Jul 12, 2015 7:35 pm

its still a rather short backstory

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PostSubject: Re: Rakutsu Hayasa   Sun Jul 12, 2015 8:48 pm

*sighs*
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PostSubject: Re: Rakutsu Hayasa   Mon Jul 13, 2015 6:05 pm

sigh, im gonna accept you but you need to learn while roleplaying how things work, dont try to just breeze through stuff, for you im gonna set you as an intermediate roleplayer so that people understand what your can and cant do

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